Good Friday poem

by Melanie Jongsma, Wordsmith on April 20, 2011 · 11 comments

in Faith (sharing our part in God's story), Story Breaks (sharing my own random stories)

I, too,
sleep,
while He prays
and sweats blood in agony.
Somehow never see His
anguished eyes
outstretched arms
“Come to me?”

And I, too,
weep bitter tears
when the shame rips my heart,
not after cock crow,
but as the wine burns my throat.

But
He grits His teeth
while we still pound nails
through hands, and weary heart.

And, tears brimming,
He still holds wide His arms.

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Kim April 20, 2011 at 8:33 am

That was very touching. It spoke right to the heart of my family’s situation right now. Thanks

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Ann April 20, 2011 at 10:06 am

Beautiful reminder that I need Jesus’ grace-filled open arms at the cross and every moment.

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Melanie Jongsma, Wordsmith April 21, 2011 at 1:24 pm

Yes, Easter is powerful, but only after we realize the high price of Good Friday.

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Amanda April 20, 2011 at 1:15 pm

Raw and real. Very beautiful, Melanie. I’d like to share it on my recent post.

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Melanie Jongsma, Wordsmith April 20, 2011 at 1:18 pm

I would love that—thank you! (I shared your post on a couple of my Facebook pages.)

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Pat Jaracz April 20, 2011 at 4:34 pm

My spirit winced at the image of Jesus gritting His teeth in pain while I pounded more nails . . . viewing my sins that way reveals their full ugliness. Your words helped me realize that sometimes I take my sins far too lightly.

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Melanie Jongsma, Wordsmith April 20, 2011 at 8:46 pm

Thanks for sharing that, Pat. That’s profound.

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Elizabeth April 5, 2012 at 8:37 pm

Thanks for sharing

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Melanie Jongsma, Wordsmith April 5, 2012 at 8:59 pm

Thank you, Elizabeth.

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Dave-RightingOurConsent April 6, 2012 at 12:46 am

Beautifully written, shared with our newsletter readers.

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Melanie Jongsma, Wordsmith April 6, 2012 at 7:44 am

Thank you, Dave. I hope it speaks to them.

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